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RE: [Sip] WGLC: draft-ietf-sip-connected-identity



Keith, John, all,
 
My review of the 01 version of the draft only resulted in some minor
editorial suggestions:
 
page 3: 3, 4th paragraph, "owing to", consider "due to". 
page 5: 5, second paragraph, "A request in either direction after answer
can indicate a change of user", consider inserting "connected" before
"user".
 
Regards,
Sietse van der Gaast

Sietse van der Gaast
Bell Labs Europe
Lucent Technologies
Hilversum, the Netherlands


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Drage, Keith (Keith) 
> Sent: maandag 4 september 2006 21:22
> To: sip at ietf.org
> Cc: Elwell, John
> Subject: [Sip] WGLC: draft-ietf-sip-connected-identity
> 
> (as WG chair)
> 
> This is to announce a Working Group Last Call on:
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-connected-i
> dentity-01
> .txt
> 
> Connected Identity in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)
> 
> Please review and provide comments (along with any suggestions for
> resolution) on this document by:
> 
> 	Monday 18th September 2006.
> 	---------------------------
> 
> In addition, if you have reviewed and have no comments on 
> this version of the document, that is useful information, so 
> please indicate this direct to the WG chairs.
> 
> Please note that a known issue with this document is that the 
> example calculation of the signatures and the corresponding 
> certificate has not yet occurred. This will be completed in 
> the next version using the same automatic mechanisms used for 
> RFC 4474, so comments on this are not necessary. However 
> comments otherwise on the contents of the examples are 
> entirely appropriate.
> 
> 
> Regards
> 
> Keith
> 
> Keith Drage
> Lucent Technologies
> drage at lucent.com
> tel: +44 1793 776249
> 
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