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Re: [Sip] WGLC: draft-ietf-sip-certs-01
Hi,
Regarding the "cert" draft, I have some remarks regarding
the "Overview" and "Examples" sections, plus
some editorial notes.
Joël
In "3. Overview":
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There are in Bob's domain 3 servers: Proxy, Auth and Cred.
Page 7, when:
"Alice decides that she wishes to discover Bob's
certificate, Alice's UA sends a SUBSCRIBE message to Bob's AOR.
The proxy in Bob's domain routes this to the credential server
via an authorization service".
What do you mean by "authorization service"? conversely to the
"authentication service" and the "credential service" there is no
clear standardization of it for SIP. Is it related
to some trait-based mechanism? what would be its
role in this very case and why not to have the proxy route
the SUBSCRIBE request directly to the credential server?
Likewise, in the same paragraph:
"The credential server returns a NOTIFY that contains Bob's public
certificate in the body. This is routed through an authentication
service that signs that this message really can validly claim to be
from the AOR "sip:bob at example.com". Alice's UA receives the
certificate and can use it to encrypt a message to Bob."
According to the figure page 6, the "authentication service" is provided by
the same server as the "authorization service". Typically, it would be provided -- as a
general service for the domain -- by the Proxy.
Is not the Auth server superfluous, or is there any reason we need one?
In "8. Examples":
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In 8.1 we see that the authentication service is provided by the Credential
server. I would add a "date" header since it is mandatory.
In 8.2, first paragraph:
"When Alice's UA wishes to publish Alice's public and private keys to
the credential service, it sends a PUBLISH request like the one
below. This must be sent over a TLS connection in which the other
end of the connection presents a certificate that matches the
credential service for Alice and digest challenges the request to
authenticate her."
What do you mean by "that matches the credential service"? the TLS server
certificate is not related to the credential service.
In the PUBLISH request, I would add the header:
Event: credential
Editorial remarks:
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In "1. Introduction" (2nd paragraph):
Replace:
In addition, this specification provides a which mechanism allows SIP
by:
In addition, this specification provides a mechanism that allows SIP
In "4. UA Behavior with Certificates" (last paragraph):
Replace:
be valid and legal for that UA to send a 302 redirecting the call to
Charlie.
by:
be valid and legal for that UA to send a 302 redirecting the call to
Bob.
In "6.5. NOTIFY Bodies":
Replace:
other type. The Content-Disposition MUST be set to "signal", as
defined in as defined in [16].
by:
other type. The Content-Disposition MUST be set to "signal", as
defined in [16].
In "12. References": replace [2] and [19] by:
[2] Peterson, J. and C. Jennings, "Enhancements for Authenticated
Identity Management in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)",
RFC 4474, August 2006.
[19] Roach, A., Campbell, B., and J. Rosenberg, "A Session Initiation
Protocol (SIP) Event Notification Extension for Resource Lists",
RFC 4662, August 2006.
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