Re: [Sip] draft-ietf-sip-rph-new-namespaces-01

[Dale.Worley at comcast.net]

   From: "DRAGE, Keith \(Keith\)" <drage at alcatel-lucent.com>

   1)	Change section 1 from

   Each will be RFC 4412 defined as preemption 
      based in nature, and will have the same 9 priority-values. 

   To 

   Each will be preemption 
   in nature, as defined in RFC 4412, and will have the same 9
   priority-values. 

I think the way you want to phrase that is "Each will use a preemption
policy, as defined in RFC 4412, ...".  It would read even more easily
if you said "Each will be preemptive [in nature], ...", but
"preemptive" does not appear in RFC 4412.  But "preemption policy" is
used in section 4.5.1.

Dale


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