[Sipping] WGLC comments on draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-00

[Ben Campbell <ben at estacado.net>]

[Oops, sent to SIP by mistake. Resending to SIPPING. Sorry for the  
duplicate.]

Hi,

This draft looks mostly done to me--my comments are pretty trivial.  
(Or maybe I am just too tired to be picky right now :-) )

Section 2:

> Any SIP server, be it a proxy, B2BUA (Back-to-Back User Agent), or
>    some hybrid, that receives a request, translates its Request-URI  
> into
>    one or more next-hop URIs (i.e., recipient URIs), and delivers the
>    request to those URIs.

(editorial) Partial paragraph? I think this is the definition of a  
"relay", but the term never appears.


5.1

> The name of this event package is "pending-additions".

Since the use of this package is scoped to the consent-framework,  
could we have less generic package name? Maybe "pending-consent" or  
"consent-pending-additions"?

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