[Sipping] Re: WGLC draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-00

[Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo at ericsson.com>]

Hi Mary,

thanks for your comments. Answers inline:

mary.barnes at comcast.net wrote:
> Draft:  draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-00.txt
> Reviewer: Mary Barnes [mary.barnes at nortel.com]
> Review Date: 17 October 2006
> Review Deadline: 17 October 2006
> Status: WGLC
>  
> Summary:  This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a 
> couple nits that should be fixed before publication.
>  
> Comments/nits:
> - Abstract, 2nd sentence: Just for clarification, it would be useful to 
> qualify the relay as a "SIP" relay:
> OLD:
>    This event package is used by relays to inform user agents about the
>    consent-related status of the entries to be added to a resource list.
> NEW:
>    This event package is used by SIP relays to inform user agents about the
>    consent-related status of the entries to be added to a resource list.

Done.

>  
> -Section 2, 2nd paragraph: this seems to be some stray text as it's a 
> leftover definition for "Relay".  I would suggest removing this 
> altogether (rather than duplicating all the definitions in this doc) and 
> adding a statement like the following:
> "This document uses the terminology defined in [8]."

Ben reported the same missing text. I have chosen to leave the 
definition adding the word "Relay" at the beginning.

I have posted a working copy of the next revision of this document at:

http://users.piuha.net/gonzalo/temp/draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-01.txt

Cheers,

Gonzalo


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