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[Sipping] Re: WGLC comments on draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-00

Hi Ben,

thanks for your comments. Answers inline:

Ben Campbell wrote:
[Oops, sent to SIP by mistake. Resending to SIPPING. Sorry for the duplicate.]

Hi,

This draft looks mostly done to me--my comments are pretty trivial. (Or maybe I am just too tired to be picky right now :-) )

Section 2:

Any SIP server, be it a proxy, B2BUA (Back-to-Back User Agent), or
   some hybrid, that receives a request, translates its Request-URI into
   one or more next-hop URIs (i.e., recipient URIs), and delivers the
   request to those URIs.

(editorial) Partial paragraph? I think this is the definition of a "relay", but the term never appears. 

Fixed.



5.1

The name of this event package is "pending-additions".

Since the use of this package is scoped to the consent-framework, could we have less generic package name? Maybe "pending-consent" or "consent-pending-additions"? 

Now it uses "consent-pending-additions"


I have posted a working copy of the next revision of this document at:

http://users.piuha.net/gonzalo/temp/draft-ietf-sipping-pending-additions-01.txt

Cheers,

Gonzalo


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