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[Sipping] RE: [Fwd: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]
The comments I raised during my earlier review have now been dealt with
satisfactorily.
John
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo at ericsson.com]
> Sent: 03 March 2007 12:46
> To: Gonzalo Camarillo
> Cc: vkg at lucent.com; Elwell, John;
> joel.repiquet at tech-invite.com; bvnkumar at gmail.com;
> ravipati at avaya.com; dworley at pingtel.com; jbemmel at zonnet.nl;
> eburger at cantata.com; Miguel.An.Garcia at nokia.com; Mary Barnes;
> Alan Johnston; Robert Sparks;
> kevin.summers at prodeasystems.com; Cullen Jennings; Jon Peterson
> Subject: Re: [Fwd: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt]
>
> Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
>
> the authors have submitted yet another revision of the draft that is
> supposed to address your last set of comments on revision 11. As in
> previous occasions, could you please have a look at it and
> send a note
> to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the chairs, stating
> whether or not
> you are now OK with the draft?
>
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-12.txt
>
> For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
>
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
>
> The diff between revisions 11 and 12 is available at:
>
> http://tools.ietf.org/wg/sipping/draft-ietf-sipping-service-ex
amples/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-12-from-11.diff.html
>
> Thanks,
>
> Gonzalo
>
>
> Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> > Dear reviewers of the service examples draft,
> >
> > the authors of the draft have submitted a new revision of
> the draft that
> > is supposed to address all your WGLC comments. Could you
> please have a
> > look at it and send a note to the SIPPING mailing list, cc:ing the
> > chairs, stating whether or not you are now OK with the draft?
> >
> >
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-11.txt
> >
> >
> > For your convenience, your reviews are stored at:
> >
> http://www.softarmor.com/sipping/process/wg-review/sipping-rt-
> wglc.html
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Gonzalo
> >
> > Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> all of you in the 'To' field of this email have
> volunteered to review
> >> the service examples draft. Thanks a lot for agreeing to
> perform this
> >> review.
> >>
> >> This is how we would like to divide the work: in the list
> below, I have
> >> assigned a few sections to each of the reviewers. When you
> are done with
> >> your review, send it in a reply-to-all to the email below,
> which was the
> >> WGLC for this draft on the SIPPING mailing list. We would
> like to have
> >> all the reviews ready by the end of the WGLC, on July 1st.
> >>
> >>
> >> <vkg at lucent.com>
> >> 2.1. Call Hold
> >> 2.2. Consultation Hold
> >>
> >> <john.elwell at siemens.com>
> >> 2.3. Music On Hold
> >> 2.18. Automatic Redial
> >> 2.19. Click to Dial
> >>
> >> <joel.repiquet at tech-invite.com>
> >> 2.4. Transfer - Unattended
> >> 2.5. Transfer - Attended
> >> 2.6. Transfer - Instant Messaging
> >>
> >> <bvnkumar at gmail.com>
> >> 2.7. Call Forwarding Unconditional
> >> 2.8. Call Forwarding - Busy
> >> 2.9. Call Forwarding - No Answer
> >>
> >> <ravipati at avaya.com>
> >> 2.10. 3-way Conference - Third Party is Added
> >> 2.11. 3-way Conference - Third Party Joins
> >>
> >> <eburger at cantata.com>
> >> 2.12. Single Line Extension
> >>
> >> <jbemmel at zonnet.nl>
> >> 2.13. Find-Me
> >>
> >> <Miguel.An.Garcia at nokia.com>
> >> 2.14. Call Management (Incoming Call Screening)
> >> 2.15. Call Management (Outgoing Call Screening)
> >>
> >> <dworley at pingtel.com>
> >> 2.16. Call Park
> >> 2.17. Call Pickup
> >>
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> -------- Original Message --------
> >> Subject: WGLC of draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt
> >> Date: Thu, 11 May 2006 20:37:40 +0300
> >> From: Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo at ericsson.com>
> >> To: sipping <sipping at ietf.org>
> >> CC: Samuli Pöykkö <samuli.poykko at hut.fi>, Mary Barnes
> >> <mary.barnes at nortel.com>, Alan Johnston
> <alan at sipstation.com>, Robert
> >> Sparks <RjS at estacado.net>, kevin.summers at sonusnet.com
> >>
> >> Folks,
> >>
> >> we would like to working group last call (WGLC) the
> following draft:
> >>
> >>
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sipping-service
-examples-10.txt
> >>
> >>
> >> as you have probably noticed if you clicked on the link
> above, this is a
> >> very long draft. Therefore, we would like to get at least
> ten volunteers
> >> to review it. We will assign a couple of sections to each reviewer.
> >>
> >> If you are interested and willing to review this draft,
> please send an
> >> email to the SIPPING chairs.
> >>
> >> The email below should be considered as a WGLC comment:
> >>
> >> http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/sipping/current/msg10886.html
> >>
> >> This is the output of the idnits tool:
> >>
> >> idnits 1.96
> >>
> >> tmp/draft-ietf-sipping-service-examples-10.txt:
> >>
> >>
> >> Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
> >>
> >> Checking conformance with RFC 3978/3979 boilerplate...
> >>
> >> the boilerplate looks good.
> >>
> >> * There is 1 instance of too long lines in the document,
> the longest
> >> one
> >> being 1 character in excess of 72.
> >>
> >> Checking nits according to
> http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
> >> Nothing found here (but these checks do not cover all of
> >> 1id-guidelines.txt yet).
> >>
> >> Miscellaneous warnings:
> >> - Line 1028 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob place...'
> >> - Line 1404 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob takes...'
> >> - Line 1732 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob place...'
> >> - Line 2459 has weird spacing: '...and Bob have ...'
> >> - Line 2597 has weird spacing: '... /* Bob puts ...'
> >> - (4 more instances...)
> >>
> >> Experimental warnings:
> >> - Unused Reference: [18] is defined on line 7860, but
> not referenced
> >> - Unused Reference: [13] is defined on line 7839, but
> not referenced
> >> - Unused Reference: [14] is defined on line 7842, but
> not referenced
> >> - Unused Reference: [1] is defined on line 7795, but not
> referenced
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> This WGLC will end on July 1st, 2006 (a long draft needs a
> long WGLC).
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >> SIPPING co-chair
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >
> >
>
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