[TLS] Proto write-up for TLS exporter
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[TLS] Proto write-up for TLS exporter
(1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the
Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the
document and, in particular, does he or she believe this
version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication?
I, Joe Salowey, co-chair of the TLS working group, am the Document
shepherd for this document. I have reviewed the document and I believe
it is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication.
(1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members
and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have
any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that
have been performed?
The document has been reviewed by key working group members that
understand TLS. The document has also been reviewed by members of the
cryptographic community that are experts in key derivation.
(1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with
AAA, internationalization or XML?
The document deals with cryptography and has had cryptographic review.
(1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director
and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he
or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or
has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any
event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated
that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those
concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
been filed? If so, please include a reference to the
disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on
this issue.
The document shepherd has no concerns with the document. There is an
IPR disclosure that lists this document:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1004/. The contents of this disclosure
where originally posted to the list on June 30, 2008
(http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/tls/current/msg02770.html). The
IETF IPR disclosure reference was recently posted to the TLS list as
well. There has been little discussion on this in the working group.
The general sentiment is that the IPR is applicable to cases where ECC
certificates are used.
(1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it
represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with
others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and
agree with it?
The consensus behind this document is strong with decent support and
participation from the working group.
(1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme
discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in
separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It
should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is
entered into the ID Tracker.)
No.
(1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the
document satisfies all ID nits? (See
http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and
http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are
not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document
met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB
Doctor, media type and URI type reviews?
There are a few nits with respect to references in the document. There
is also one instance of "MUST not" that should be replaced by "MUST
NOT".
(1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and
informative? Are there normative references to documents that
are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear
state? If such normative references exist, what is the
strategy for their completion? Are there normative references
that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If
so, list these downward references to support the Area
Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].
The Document has split references. In the current version some of the
references are out of date or missing. A informative reference to RFC
5216 should be added in place of 2716. The reference to RFC 5281 should
be informative. The reference to the DTLS-SRTP draft should be
rectified in the text.
(1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA
consideration section exists and is consistent with the body
of the document? If the document specifies protocol
extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA
registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If
the document creates a new registry, does it define the
proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation
procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a
reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC5226]. If the
document describes an Expert Review process has Shepherd
conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG
can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG Evaluation?
Yes
(1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the
document that are written in a formal language, such as XML
code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in
an automated checker?
Yes
(1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document
Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document
Announcement Write-Up? Recent examples can be found in the
"Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval
announcement contains the following sections:
Technical Summary
A number of protocols wish to leverage Transport Layer Security (TLS) to
perform key establishment but then use some of the keying material for
their own purposes. This document describes a general mechanism for
allowing that.
Working Group Summary
There was significant consensus in the working group supporting this
document. The largest controversy was over the name.
Document Quality
The approach is planned for use in several protocols. The document has
been reviewed by cryptographers who are experts in the area of key
derivation.
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