[trill] My thoughts/corrections -> draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - 2 week WG LC
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Subject: [trill] My thoughts/corrections -> draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - 2 week WG LC
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TRILL: RBridge Channel Tunnel Protocol <draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05.txt> corrections:: page 16 4.5 RFC 5310 Based Authentication ["or" should be "on"] (as written) o RESV: Six bits that MUST be sent as zero and ignored or receipt. (should be) o RESV: Six bits that MUST be sent as zero and ignored on receipt --------------------------------------------------------- page 17 4.5 RFC 5310 Based Authentication [second "that" probably should be "the" or not there at all] (as written) o Key ID: specifies the same keying value and authentication algorithm that that Key ID specifies for TRILL IS-IS LSP [RFC5310] Authentication TLVs. (probably should be) o Key ID: specifies the same keying value and authentication algorithm that Key ID specifies for TRILL IS-IS LSP [RFC5310] Authentication TLVs. (could be) o Key ID: specifies the same keying value and authentication algorithm that the Key ID specifies for TRILL IS-IS LSP [RFC5310] Authentication TLVs. ---------------------------------------------------- page 22 7. Security Considerations third paragraph first sentence ['taking" should be "taken"] (as written) On the negative side, the optional ability to tunnel various payload types and to tunnel them between TRILL switches and to and from end stations can increase risk unless precautions are taking. (should be) On the negative side, the optional ability to tunnel various payload types and to tunnel them between TRILL switches and to and from end stations can increase risk unless precautions are taken. --------------------------------------------------------- page 22 Security Considerations third paragraph second sentence [sentence is a bit "run on". I'd at least add a comma if breaking it into two sentences doesn't appeal to you. (as written) The processing of decapsulating Tunnel Protocol payloads is not a good place to be liberal in what you accept as the tunneling facility makes it easier for unexpected messages to pop up in unexpected places in a TRILL campus due to accidents or the actions of an adversary. (could be) The processing of decapsulating Tunnel Protocol payloads is not a good place to be liberal in what you accept, as the tunneling facility makes it easier for unexpected messages to pop up in unexpected places in a TRILL campus due to accidents or the actions of an adversary. (maybe) The processing of decapsulating Tunnel Protocol payloads is not a good place to be liberal in what you accept. This is because the tunneling facility makes it easier for unexpected messages to pop up in unexpected places in a TRILL campus due to accidents or the actions of an adversary. ============================================ Just a Note:: Page 3 CCM is defined as Continuity Check Message in other TRILL documents. It is defined Counter with CBC-MAC (Cypher Block Chaining - Message Authentication Code) in the draft.
- [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - 2 we… Susan Hares
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … Linda Dunbar
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … Mingui Zhang
- [trill] My thoughts/corrections -> draft-ietf-tri… gayle noble
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … Mohammed Umair
- Re: [trill] My thoughts/corrections -> draft-ietf… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … gayle noble
- Re: [trill] draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-05 - … Liyizhou