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Re: [Uri-review] draft-larmouth-oid-iri-01 editorials

The text below should probably be 

   This internet draft defines the IRI/URI scheme for International
   Object Identifiers.  The syntax and semantics of the IRI is specified
   below using the International Object Identifier tree specified in
|  ITU-T X.660: "International Object Identifiers".

And change the baroque style of

|  There has been in existence for some time a URN scheme of "urn:oid",
|  but this is based entirely on numeric identification of each arc.

To something simpler:

|  The URN namespace "urn:oid" as defined in [insert a reference here]
|  is based entirely on numeric identification of each arc.

Regards,
Chris