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Re: [Uri-review] draft-wilde-sms-uri-19 remaining editorials

hello alfred.

my apologies for the delay, and thanks for the comments.


Please add the missing "of" :
|  for the definition of <unreserved> and <pct-encoded>, and the details
                     ^^^^


done.


                  vvvvvvvv
|  5.  If the URI contains of a comma-separated list of recipients


changed to "... contains a comma-separated ..."


---vvvvvv                                                             v
|             [...].  The SMS message MUST NOT contain any HTTP header
|  fields, only the form data.  The media type is implicit.  It MUST NOT


done.


|  certain SMS User Data header fields.  Gateways that accept SMS
            v    v             ^^^^^^             v
|  messages (e.g., in e-mail messages or Web forms) and pass them on to
|  an SMSC SHOULD implement this kind of "firewalling" approach as well.
          ^


done.

thanks a lot and kind regards,

erik wilde   tel:+1-510-6432253 - fax:+1-510-6425814
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