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Re: [VCARDDAV] Comments on draft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav-05



I don't mind, really, I should have put more context in the suggestion itself and maybe add a "take it only if you like it" note. I think we have wasted enough bytes talking about it :)

Cyrus Daboo wrote:
Hi Simon,

--On March 2, 2009 3:24:01 PM -0500 Simon Vaillancourt <simon.vaillancourt at oracle.com> wrote:

I just ran it through a spell checker which suggested to replace "all
the" with "the entire" so after asking a tech writer here, he agreed it
sounded better. Both sentences mean the same thing, it's just that one is
sounding slightly better. Yes, that is a bit nitpicky.

I think the spell checker is being dumb. It is only considering "all the address" which would be wrong by itself, rather than "all the address book collections" which is fine. Now if you really prefer "the entire" it would be better as "the entire set of address book collections ...".