Re: issue with the URLs in the ID boilerplate

[Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman at vpnc.org>]

At 5:26 PM +0300 10/23/09, Lars Eggert wrote:
>On 2009-10-23, at 15:49, Spencer Dawkins wrote:
>>anyone trying to find the shadows would be
>>better served with a google search
>
>Yup.
>
>If we wanted to, we could put a pointer to the main IETF site in there without wasting a line, e.g. by changing
>
>>   Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
>>   Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups.  Note that
>>   other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet-
>>   Drafts.
>
>to
>
>>   Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering
>>   Task Force (IETF). The Internet-Draft repository is online at
>>   https://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/. Note that other groups may
>>   also distribute working documents as Internet-Drafts.

Please swap the second and third sentences to give the paragraph better continuity, but then +1.

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