Re: [IAB] issue with the URLs in the ID boilerplate

[John C Klensin <klensin at jck.com>]

Lars,

Thanks.  This works for me.  I do suggest exposing it to a
broader community, e.g., on the IETF list and with notes to the
leadership of the other three streams, before making the change,
but I think this ought to be ok.

best,
    john


--On Monday, October 26, 2009 16:34 +0200 Lars Eggert
<lars.eggert at nokia.com> wrote:

> Hi, John,
> 
> point taken. This was supposed to be a simple elimination of a
> few lines, but I went down the rathole of starting to tweak
> the boilerplate too much. (Never a good idea.) So let's do a
> minimal change compared to current text:
> 
>    Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet
> Engineering
>    Task Force (IETF).  Note that other groups may also
> distribute
>    working documents as Internet-Drafts.  The list of current
>    Internet-Drafts is at http://datatracker.ietf.org/drafts/.
> 
>    Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of
> six months
>    and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other
> documents at any
>    time.  It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as
> reference
>    material or to cite them other than as "work in progress."
> 
>    This Internet-Draft will expire on <date>.
> 
> Compared to the version currently used, this:
> 
> (1) removes the "its areas, and its working groups" part from
> the first sentence
> (2) appends "The list of current Internet-Drafts..." to the
> first paragraph
> (3) removes the shadow repository pointers
> 
> See the attached diff for marked-up changes.
> 
> Lars
>