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Area Director Review Comments
AD #1 – Boilerplate
1.1 New MIB boilerplate is now preferred
see www.ops.ietf.org
Nice thing is that it is much shorter and has far less references.
1.2 New MIB security guidelines to be followed
This one is a bit more elaborate than what you
1.3 We want MIB Copyright in the MODULE-IDENTITY in the DESCRIPTION clause. See recent discussions on MIBS mailing list and in
draft-ietf-ops-mib-review-guidelines-01.txt
1.4 Page 4, you may want to add [RFC2119] reference to the text
Proposal: Make these changes
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