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Document: draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2022-02-11
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I have no major issues with the content of the document. I do have an editorial comment that I'd like the authors to address.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1 says:

   "This document obsoletes [RFC8728] by defining version 3 of the RFC
   Editor Model.  This document updates [RFC7841] by defining
   boilerplate text for the Editorial Stream.  This document updates
   [RFC8729] by replacing the RFC Editor role with the RSWG, RSAB, and
   RSCE.  This document updates [RFC8730] by removing the dependency on
   certain policies specified by the IAB and RSE."

As there are no "Updates to RFCXXX" sections in the document, I think it would be useful to add references to the Sections where 7841, 8729 and 8730 are updated.  E.g., the definition of the new stream is quite easy to find, but still.