Hi I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. I'm not an expert on some of the details in here nor up to date with how common some scenarios are now days vs. others. But I have no operational concerns with the doc, it's well written, clear and it makes sense to me. Some of the earlier mentioned suggestions and nits by others has also been addressed in this version. Regards, Niclas