I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2025-01-27 IETF LC End Date: 2025-01-30 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. This was this reviewer's first introduction to anima. As a result, this review is limited to document form, not technical details. It is a very well written document. It is however forbiddingly long and intimidating to read. It has a very distinct repetitive structure. (Many twisty little passages, all different, but very similar.) It seems like it could perhaps be represented in a more concise way that would be easier to read. But I don't have a specific suggestion. ISSUES: 0 NITS: 3 1) NIT: Non-RFC2606-compliant FQDN Section 6.1.2 (Discovery of the Pledge) uses an FQDN, "_brski-pledge._tcp.local", that triggers an IdNits non-RFC2606-compliant FQDN warning. This is perhaps mitigated somewhat by being a local FQDN. I don't have a specific recommendation whether or not to change this. 2) NIT: Language In the first paragraph of Section 8 (Logging), I suggest minor syntax tweaks in the first paragraph: s/Recommend key events for logging comprise/Recommended key events for logging comprise:/ 3) NIT: Stale References There are three outdated references to related anima documents. I trust these will be dealt with in due course.