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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-ip-preof-08
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2023-12-19
IETF LC End Date: 2023-12-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    The term PREOF is used without any expansion or definition in the introduction.  Some elaboration of the term should be included at first usage.
    It may make sense to define F-label even though all the references to it in this document are saying that it is not used.  As a reader, I was left inferring what was not being done.