I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs. For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir I think the document is basically ready. I spotted a few nits, feel free to ignore as many as you like. * Abstract > This document describes the format and publication mechanisms IANA > intends to use to distribute the DNSSEC trust anchors. while in "1. Introduction" we have: > This document describes the formats and distribution methods of DNSSEC > trust anchors that have been used by IANA for the root zone of the DNS > since 2010. Which one is it? Maybe this would be better: > This document describes the format and publication mechanisms IANA > uses to distribute the DNSSEC trust anchors. * 1. Introduction > A detailed description of corresponding > key management practices can be found in [DPS], which can be > retrieved from the IANA Repository at . It seems redundant to add a reference as [DPS] and then provide a link in-line. Additionally the reference and in-line link are different: https://www.iana.org/dnssec/ vs. https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures Maybe just shorten it to > A detailed description of corresponding key management practices can > be found in [DPS]. * 2. IANA DNSSEC Root Zone Trust Anchor Formats and Semantics > IANA publishes trust anchors for the root zone as an XML document > that contains the hashes of the DNSKEY records. since IANA wishes to also publish the DNSKEY itself, maybe this is better: > IANA publishes trust anchors for the root zone as an XML document > that contains the hashes of the DNSKEY records and optionally the keys > from the DNSKEY records. * Appendix A. Historical Note Missing text: > The second KSK for use in the root zone of the DNS was [ MORE GOES > HERE ].