I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-15 Reviewer: Dale R. Worley Review Date: 2017-05-09 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-22 IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-11 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. There is one remaining nit: 2. Terminology Security Service Provider: A provider of security services to the customers (end-users or enterprises) using NSF equipment purchased from vendors or created by the service provider. Per my discussion with the authors, the intended style is to not specifically capitalize the term "security service provider". Hence, this entry headword should be "Security service provider". [END]