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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-06
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2022-10-30

This document combines RFC3709 and RFC6170 and obsoletes them. This document is well written. It is almost Ready with minor Nits:

draft-ietf-httpbis-semantics has been published as RFC 9110.
Normative reference to an Informational RFC1952.

One more consideration: this document adds a new object identifier. Technically, it is fine. However, it is defined/appeared only in an Appendix. I am not sure this is procedurely right or not. Should not it at least be mentioned/defined in the main text?

Regards,

Sheng