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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc8399bis-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-01-03
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-02
IESG Telechat date: 2024-01-18

Summary: the document is very clear on the changes to RFC8399. 


Major issues:

RFC8399 documents the changes to RFC5280. This document obsolete the RFC8399. does it mean all the changes documented in RFC8399 are not valid anymore? 

It would be nicer to have a complete document incorporating all the changes, such as in the appendix. So that new people can get the complete description without going through many RFCs. 

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: