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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2023-04-27
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-03
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
Ready for publication as a proposed standard rfc but with nits to consider before publication.

Nits:
1) It would be nice to explain when/how the registries got renamed?

2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs can do this). Otherwise it adds to the list of URLs that we have to keep alive forever.