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Document:  

draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-management-snapshot-03

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2015–6-14

IETF LC End Date: 2015–6-21

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational  RFC.

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

I was wondering about the value of C, the document references  RFC 5497 which says A protocol using this time representation MUST define the value of C.  Is there some recommendation here?

 

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 3.3 I am not sure what the following sentence in parentheses means: (up to and including mechanisms involving depleted uranium)