I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-03 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2021-12-13 IETF LC End Date: unknown IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Note: I am not a good persone to review the YANG specification. I assume one of the YANG Doctors will have a look at this document too. Major Concerns: Section 1 says: To satisfy these two key use cases, objects may be found in one of three ways: This lead to some confusion for me. Earlier in the document, it says: This specification does not allow for vulnerability information to be retrieved directly from the endpoint. That's because vulnerability information changes occur at different rates to software updates. After thinking about it, I realized that the objects do not include vulnerability information, but pointers to obtain vulnerability information. Please reword to others do not need to give it the same amount of thought. Minor Concerns: Section 1, first sentence: The reference to "A number of activities" is very vague. It is not wrong. Please be more specific, provide some references, or drop the vague reference altogether. Section 1 says: In the second case, when a device does not have an appropriate retrieval interface, but one is directly available from the manufacturer, a URI to that information must be discovered. s/must/MUST/ ? Nits: The terms "software" and "firmware" are used with essentially the same meaning in this document. If there is a difference, it needs to be explained. If they are the same in the context of this document, please say so. Abstract, last sentence: please add "(MUD)" and also a pointer to RFC 8520. Section 1, first sentence: The reference to "A number of activities" is very vague. It is not wrong. Please be more specific, provide some references, or drop the vague reference altogether.