1 module in this draft: - ietf-ac-common@2023-11-13.yang YANG compiler errors or warnings (pyang 2.6.0, yanglint 2.1.128, yangson 1.4.19) - No compiler errors or warnings NOTE: This module was reviewed and validated (stub instance-data) in conjunction with draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-03 and I did my best to separate comments out to each even though validation crosses the 2 reviews General comments on the draft: - Section 3: There is reference to the tree and the tree being too long but this module is solely groupings, identities and typedefs thus there is no implementation of a standalone data tree in this common module. Is this moreso in reference to a tree output that might include `--tree-print-groupings` as seen in a subsequent section? - Section 4: Move the "file" declaration in up to align and quote "ietf-ac-common@2023-11-13.yang" otherwise published IETF tooling will fail to parse correctly General comments on the module: - Suggestion: Insert appropriate line breaks throughout module statements for readability - L#509: must statement needs to qualify identities as 'ac-common:slaac' and 'ac-common:provider-dhcp-slaac' otherwise the imports/uses will assume localization (Suggest auditing all 'when' and 'must' statements that reference identities to ensure full qualification for any future imports) - L#1329: Address/remove comment - L#1404: s/type\{/type \{/ - Minor nit: s/Indciates/Indicates/ -> "Indciates the actual date and time when the service" - For "vlan-id" related leaves, should these be scoped in the uint16 space? - For the `pseudowire` and `vpls` groupings, there is a duplication of nodes. Does it make sense to consolidate as much as possible and only diverge where necessary?