Apologies for the delay in coming back to you. This was due to my
inexperience of the review procedure.

Thank you for the changes, they address all the raised issue.
Unfortunately my requested change introduced a new nit:

| If an organization uses an internal name like .internal and then want
| your services to be available via or within some other cloud provider
| which also uses .internal, then collisions might occur.

should be

| If an organization uses an internal name like .internal and then want
| their services to be available via or within some other cloud provider
| which also uses .internal, then collisions might occur.

i.e. s/your/their/

Florian