I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-tram-turn-mobility-03 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2016-08-08 IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-11 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has some minor issues and nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: None Minor issues: 3.1.2 - Change "MUST" to "will" both times in the second paragraph. The last sentence of the section I don't understand; it doesn't seem to have any interoperability implications, and I don't see why the client can't examine the ticket in any way it wants. Either justify the sentence or delete it. 3.2.2 - Change "may" to "MAY" in the sixth paragraph. That *is* a protocol option being described there. Nits/editorial comments: 3.1.4 - Change "MAY" to "can" in the second paragraph. I'd also split that sentence into two sentences as the first half has nothing to do with the second half. 3.2.1 - The last sentence of 3.2.1 is confusing until you read 3.2.2 and 3.2.3. I would simply delete the sentence. I don't think it adds anything. 3.4 - Put the "TBD" in there so that the RFC Editor can update. 4 - Put a note to the RFC Editor here to update sections 3.1.4 and 3.4 with the error number. That will make sure it gets updated properly. pr -- Pete Resnick Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478