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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20130625
IETF LC End Date: 20130701
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - title page 1: for  Run Length -> for Run Length

 - ToC page 2 and 9 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3: take benefit of the first "Extended Reports" to introduce
 the XR abbrev

 - 1 page 3: expand the RR abbrev (not well known according to the RFC Editor
  list 

http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt


  and BTW has at least 3 different meanings :-)

 - 1 page 3: RLE is well known (so you can keep it!)

 - 1 page 3: playout > play out (according to my spell checker...)

 - 3 page 4 (still the spell checker): recaps

Thanks

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr