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Document: draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2022-02-18
IETF LC End Date: 2022-03-07
IESG Telechat date: 2022-03-10

Summary: Ready with one major issue and one nit.

Major issues: 1
- S3.7, first paragraph: I don't think it is accurate to characterize the 
 IETF as focusing on "shorter-term issues of engineering and standards
 making."  If the contrast is being made to the "longer-term research issues" 
 of IRTF, then the comparison is flawed.  Research can be short term and
 engineering decisions can have impact over the long term; it is not our
 place to characterize research as long term and engineering as short term.
 Who arbitrates what constitutes long term and short term?  Can a short-term 
 engineering idea in the IETF have as much impact as a long running IRTF 
 group?  I suspect the answer is yes.  For these reasons, I am not sure we 
 should consider ourselves to be an arbiter of these things.  

 I believe that first paragraph will read just as well if both the qualifiers
 "longer-term" and "shorter-term" were taken out, and I would make a case
 that we should do so.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
- S3.5: Does "RFC Advisory Board (RSAB)" expand to "RFC Series Advisory Board"?
 The "Series" is missing; in the previous line RSWG expands to "RFC Series
 Working Group", so I expect a symmetry.