[babel] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-04
Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Wed, 07 November 2018 07:46 UTC
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Subject: [babel] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-babel-applicability-04
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Looks good except that a typo seems to have been introduced in the last
update. In particular, in Section 2.2
OLD
o strict monotonicity of the metric: for any metric M and link cost
C, < C + M;
NEW
o strict monotonicity of the metric: for any metric M and link cost
C, M < C + M;
^^
Although this is a pretty minor change, i think the draft should be fixed
before publication is requested.
Thanks,
Donald
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