Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling
"Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)" <giomarti@cisco.com> Wed, 05 March 2014 13:17 UTC
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From: "Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)" <giomarti@cisco.com>
To: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
Thread-Topic: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling
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Hi Lou, On 29 Oct 2013, at 19:28, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> wrote: > Authors, > I have some comments on this document. Most are strictly > editorial. Note that I'm the document shepherd, see RFC 4858 for more > information. > > - Please address my general comments on the WSON document set > > - in document > s/Bi-Directional/Bidirectional GM> ok > > - Abstract > s/Such extensions are necessary/Such extensions are applicable > drop "bidirectional LSPs, and” > GM> ok > - Section 1 > > These extensions build on previous work for the control of lambda > and G.709 based networks. > > Please add appropriate references. > > It seems to that it would be worth mentioning the rwa-info document > and the encoding document in this section. > > - section 3.1 > s/MUST/needs to > GM> ok > - Section 3.3 > s/MAY/can > s/MAY/need to be > GM> ok > - Section 3.4 > s/MAY/can > GM> ok > - section 3.5 title > s/Out of Scope/Optical Impairments > GM> ok > - Section 4.2: > To target a specific node, this section defines a WSON_Processing > object as part of the LSP_REQUIRED_ATTRIBUTE and follows procedures > defined in [RSVP-RO]. > > The content of this object is defined in the subsequent sections. > (See Section 4.3 for <RBInformation> TLV and Section 4.4 for > <WavelengthSelection> TLV, respectively.) > > Do you mean > > To target a specific node, this section defines a WSON_Processing > HOP Attribute TLV which is processed according to the procedures > defined in [RSVP-RO]. > > The content of this TLV is defined in the subsequent sections. > (See Section 4.3 for <RBInformation> sub-TLV and Section 4.4 for > <WavelengthSelection> sub-TLV, respectively.) > > if yes, also need to s/WSON Processing object/WSON Processing TLV > in rest of document. > GM> correct interpretation, ok > - Section 4.2 > You need to define the Length. Perhaps. replace the whole definition: > OLD > > The WSON Processing object encoding is defined as: > > 0 1 2 3 > 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | Type | Length | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | | > ~ Value ~ > | | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > NEW > The WSON Processing carries sub-TLVs of the same format as a HOP > Attributes TLV, as defined in [RSVP-RO]. > GM> ok > - Section 4.3. "... PathErr SHALL be generated." Which code/value? > Are you sure? Generally malformed messages don't result in a PathErr. > What is an upstream node expected to do with the PathErr? > > How should other parsing errors be handled? > > What about allocation errors? > GM> We do not expect specific errror specific error processing apart from what already defined by draft-ietf-ccamp-lsp-attribute-ro. We remove the specific error generation. > - Section 4.4 > > I'm really confused by this sub-tlv. Is it intended to be an end to > end construct, information that is used/updated hop-by-hop, or used at > specific hops only? I suspect that the desire is for this to be > communicated end to end and accessible at each hop. If so, it looks > like then intent is for this to be carried as a TLV in the > LSP_ATTRIBUTES Object. Is this correct? If so the section needs to be > updated accordingly. > GM> yes correct, we updated the section as LSP_ATTRIBUTES > - Section 5 > > I'm really not sure that this section adds anything beyond what is > already stated in other documents/RFCs, and it doesn't match this > documenting being a protocol specification. I can see some informative > value in the third paragraph. I suggest moving just this paragraph to > the end of section 4.3 and dropping the rest. > GM> ok > - Section 6 > I think this section needs to be replaced. Perhaps use the following > which is based on draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3 > > This document is builds on the mechanisms defined in [RFC3473], > and only differs in specific information communicated. As such, > this document introduces no new security considerations to the > existing GMPLS signaling protocols. See [RFC3473], for > details of the supported security measures. Additionally, > [RFC5920] provides an overview of security vulnerabilities and > protection mechanisms for the GMPLS control plane. > GM> ok > - Section 7 > This section needs a bit of work See > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-signaling-g709v3-12#section-11 > for an example. Contact me off list if you think need help with > specific text. > GM> updated the section we’ll send you an updated copy shortly for a quick review. Cheers G > That's it on this one, > Lou > > > On 10/22/2013 4:34 PM, Lou Berger wrote: >> >> All, >> Given the recent draft submission deadline and only one comment being >> received to date, we'd like to extend the WG more time for review. >> >> These drafts represent significant work by the authors and WG, so please >> review and let the WG know what you think (positive or negative)! >> >> Please have all comments in by October 29. >> >> Thank you, >> Lou (and Deborah) >> >> On 10/1/2013 12:34 PM, Lou Berger wrote: >>> All, >>> >>> This mail begins working group last call on the WSON documents. As >>> there are 6 documents in this set, the last call will be three weeks. >>> The documents included in the last call are: >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-info-18 >>> (Informational, IPR Disclosed) >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode-11 >>> (Standards Track, IPR Disclosed) >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wson-encode-21 >>> (Standards Track) >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-05 >>> (Standards Track, IPR Disclosed) >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signal-compatibility-ospf-12 >>> (Standards Track, IPR Disclosed) >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-06 (Standards >>> Track) Also has one open issue that will need to be resolved as part of >>> LC, see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/ccamp/trac/ticket/52. >>> >>> This working group last call ends on October 22. Comments should be >>> sent to the CCAMP mailing list. Please remember to include the >>> technical basis for any comments. >>> >>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is >>> ready for publication", are welcome! >>> >>> Please note that we're still missing some IPR statements. Any >>> forthcoming publication request will be delayed by late IPR >>> statements/disclosures. >>> >>> >>> Thank you, >>> Lou (and Deborah) >>> _______________________________________________ >>> CCAMP mailing list >>> CCAMP@ietf.org >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp >>> >>> >>> >>> >> _______________________________________________ >> CCAMP mailing list >> CCAMP@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ccamp >> >> >> >>
- [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-info, … Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-in… Margaria, Cyril (Coriant - DE/Munich)
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- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-in… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-in… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-in… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - rwa-in… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
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- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Leeyoung
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Giovanni Martinelli (giomarti)
- Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call: WSON documents - draft-… Lou Berger