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What was done in draft-10? The document layout was revised based on the initial recommendation and subsequent design team discussions Introduction, Terminology and Overview sections were revised Requirements detailing the proposal were specified in a single section (Profile Delivery Framework, section 5) Use cases were made high-level to better reflect the requirements for the framework Examples were expanded to provide more clarity Please refer to draft-10 for a complete list of changes Draft-09 was presented to the WG for further comments Thanks to the WG participants who provided expert review comments An attempt was made to address all the comments in draft-11 (based on design team consensus) |