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Network Working Group L. Daigle, Ed. Network Working Group L. Daigle, Ed.
Internet-Draft Internet-Draft O. Kolkman, Ed.
Intended status: BCP O. Kolkman, Ed. Updates: 4844, 2223
Expires: December 29, 2008 Internet Architecture Board (if approved) Internet Architecture Board
(IAB) Intended status: Informational (IAB)
June 27, 2008 Expires: April 9, 2009 October 6, 2008
On RFC Streams Headers and Boilerplates On RFC Streams, Headers, and Boilerplates
draft-iab-streams-headers-boilerplates-00 draft-iab-streams-headers-boilerplates-01
Status of this Memo Status of this Memo
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Abstract Abstract
RFC documents contain a number of fixed elements such as the title RFC documents contain a number of fixed elements such as the title
page header, standard boilerplates and a standard acknowledgement page header, standard boilerplates and copyright/IPR statements.
section. This document describes them and introduces some updates to This document describes them and introduces some updates to reflect
reflect current usage and requirements of RFC publication. In current usage and requirements of RFC publication. In particular,
particular, this updated structure is intended to communicate clearly this updated structure is intended to communicate clearly the source
the source of RFC creation and review. of RFC creation and review.
Table of Contents Table of Contents
1. Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 1. Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
2. RFC Streams and Internet Standards . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 2. RFC Streams and Internet Standards . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3
3. RFC Structural Elements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 3. RFC Structural Elements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
3.1. The title page header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 3.1. The title page header . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4
3.2. The Status of this Memo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 3.2. The Status of this Memo . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6
3.3. Additional Notes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 3.3. Additional Notes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8
4. Security considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 3.4. Other structural information in RFCs . . . . . . . . . . . 8
5. IANA considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 4. Security considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
6. RFC Editor Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 5. IANA considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
7. References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 6. RFC Editor Considerations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
7.1. Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 7. References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
7.2. Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 7.1. Normative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9
Appendix A. Acknowledgements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 7.2. Informative References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
Appendix B. Document Editing Details . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 Appendix A. Acknowledgements . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
Authors' Addresses . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 Appendix B. Document Editing Details . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10
Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . . . 11 B.1. version 00->01 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
B.1.1. open issues . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
Authors' Addresses . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11
Intellectual Property and Copyright Statements . . . . . . . . . . 13
1. Introduction 1. Introduction
RFCs published before this document (e.g. the one immeditatly prior Previously RFCs (e.g. [RFC4844]) contained a number of elements that
to this one [RFCXXXX-1]) (??? or is it prior to approval of this were there for historical, practical, and legal reasons. They also
document?) contained a number of elements that were there for contained boilerplate material to clearly indicate the status of the
historical, practical, and legal reasons. They also contained document and possibly contained "Notes" to indicate how the document
boilerplate material to clearly indicate the status of the document interacts with IETF standard track documents.
and possibly contained "Notes" to indicate how the document interacts
with IETF standard track documents.
As the RFC Series has evolved over the years, there has been As the RFC Series has evolved over the years, there has been
increasing concern over appropriate labelling of the publications to increasing concern over appropriate labelling of the publications to
make clear the status of each RFC and the status of the work it make clear the status of each RFC and the status of the work it
describes. Chiefly, there is a requirement that RFCs published as describes. Chiefly, there is a requirement that RFCs published as
part of the IETF's review process not be easily confused with RFCs part of the IETF's review process not be easily confused with RFCs
that may have had a very different review and approval process. that may have had a very different review and approval process.
Various adjustments have been made over the years, including evolving Various adjustments have been made over the years, including evolving
text of "Notes" included in the published RFC. text of "Notes" included in the published RFC.
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standard RFC boilerplate and introduce some adjustments to ensure standard RFC boilerplate and introduce some adjustments to ensure
better clarity of expression of document status, aligned with the better clarity of expression of document status, aligned with the
review and approval processes defined for each stream. review and approval processes defined for each stream.
This memo identifies and describes the common elements of RFC This memo identifies and describes the common elements of RFC
boilerplate structure, and provides a comprehensive approach to boilerplate structure, and provides a comprehensive approach to
updating and using those elements to communicate, with clarity, RFC updating and using those elements to communicate, with clarity, RFC
document and content status. Most of the historical structure document and content status. Most of the historical structure
information is collected from [RFC2223]. information is collected from [RFC2223].
The changes introduced by this memo should be implemented as soon as
practically possible after the document has been approved for
publication.
2. RFC Streams and Internet Standards 2. RFC Streams and Internet Standards
Users of RFCs should be aware that while all Internet standards- Users of RFCs should be aware that while all Internet standards-
related documents are published as RFCs, not all RFCs are Internet related documents are published as RFCs, not all RFCs are Internet
standards-related documents. standards-related documents.
The IETF is responsible for maintaining the Internet Standards The IETF is responsible for maintaining the Internet Standards
Process, which includes the requirements for developing, reviewing Process, which includes the requirements for developing, reviewing
and approving Standards Track and BCP RFCs. These, and any other and approving Standards Track and BCP RFCs. These, and any other
standards-related documents (Informational or Experimental) are standards-related documents (Informational or Experimental) are
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Stream. Stream.
Documents published in streams other than the IETF Stream are not Documents published in streams other than the IETF Stream are not
reviewed by the IETF for such things as security, congestion control, reviewed by the IETF for such things as security, congestion control,
or inappropriate interaction with deployed protocols. They have also or inappropriate interaction with deployed protocols. They have also
not been subject to IESG approval, including an IETF-wide last call. not been subject to IESG approval, including an IETF-wide last call.
Therefore, the IETF disclaims, for any of the non-IETF Stream Therefore, the IETF disclaims, for any of the non-IETF Stream
documents, any knowledge of the fitness of those RFCs for any documents, any knowledge of the fitness of those RFCs for any
purpose. purpose.
Refer to [RFC2026] and [RFC4844] and their succession for current Refer to [RFC2026], [I-D.housley-iesg-rfc3932bis], and [RFC4844] and
detail of IETF process and RFCs streams. their successors for current details of IETF process and RFC streams.
3. RFC Structural Elements 3. RFC Structural Elements
3.1. The title page header 3.1. The title page header
An RFC title page header can be described as follows: An RFC title page header can be described as follows:
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<document source> <author name> <document source> <author name>
Request for Comments: <RFC number> <author affiliation> Request for Comments: <RFC number> [<author affiliation>]
[<subseries ID> <subseries number>] [more author info as appropriate] [<subseries ID> <subseries number>] [more author info as appropriate]
[<RFC relation>:<RFC number[s]>] [<RFC relation>:<RFC number[s]>]
Category: <category> Category: <category>
ISSN: [TBD] <month year> <month year>
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For example, a sample earlier RFC header is as follows: For example, a sample earlier RFC header is as follows:
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Network Working Group T. Dierks Network Working Group T. Dierks
Request for Comments: 4346 Independent Request for Comments: 4346 Independent
Obsoletes: 2246 E. Rescorla Obsoletes: 2246 E. Rescorla
Category: Standards Track RTFM, Inc. Category: Standards Track RTFM, Inc.
April 2006 April 2006
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The right column contains author name and affiliation information as The right column contains author name and affiliation information as
well as RFC publication date. Conventions and restrictions for these well as RFC publication date. Conventions and restrictions for these
elements are described in RFC style norms and some individual stream elements are described in RFC style norms and some individual stream
definitions. definitions.
This memo is primarily concerned with the information in left column: This section is primarily concerned with the information in the left
column:
<document source> This describes the area where the work originates. <document source> This describes the area where the work originates.
Historically, all RFCs were labeled Network Working Group. Historically, all RFCs were labeled Network Working Group.
"Network Working Group" refers to the original version of today's "Network Working Group" refers to the original version of today's
IETF when people from the original set of Arpanet sites and IETF when people from the original set of ARPANET sites and
whomever else was interested -- the meetings were open -- got whomever else was interested -- the meetings were open -- got
together to discuss, design and document proposed protocols.' together to discuss, design and document proposed
[Steve Crocker, private communication]. Here, we obsolete the protocols[RFC0003]. Here, we obsolete the term "Network Working
term "Network Working Group" in order to indicate the originating Group" in order to indicate the originating stream.
stream.
The <document source> is the name of the RFC stream, as defined in The <document source> is the name of the RFC stream, as defined in
[RFC4844] and its successors. At the time of this publication, [RFC4844] and its successors. At the time of this publication,
the streams, and therefore the possible entries are: the streams, and therefore the possible entries are:
* IETF Stream * Internet Engineering Task Force
* IAB Stream * Internet Architecture Board
* IRTF Stream * Internet Research Task Force
* Independent Stream * Independent
Request for Comments: <RFC number> This indicates the RFC number, Request for Comments: <RFC number> This indicates the RFC number,
assigned by the RFC Editor upon publication of the document. This assigned by the RFC Editor upon publication of the document. This
element is unchanged. element is unchanged.
<subseries ID> <subseries number> Some document categories are also <subseries ID> <subseries number> Some document categories are also
labeled as a subseries of RFCs. These elements appear as labeled as a subseries of RFCs. These elements appear as
appropriate for such categories, indicating the subseries and the appropriate for such categories, indicating the subseries and the
documents number within that series. Currently, there are documents number within that series. Currently, there are
subseries for BCPs, STDs and FYIs. These subseries numbers may subseries for BCPs, STDs and FYIs. These subseries numbers may
appear in several RFCs. For example, when a new RFC updates an appear in several RFCs. For example, when a new RFC updates an
old one, the same subseries number is used. Also, several RFCs old one, the same subseries number is used. Also, several RFCs
may be assigned the same subseries number: a single STD, for may be assigned the same subseries number: a single STD, for
example, may be composed of several RFCs, each of which will bear example, may be composed of several RFCs, each of which will bear
the same STD number. This element is unchanged. the same STD number. This element is unchanged.
[<RFC relation>:<RFC number[s]>] Some relations between RFCs in the [<RFC relation>:<RFC number[s]>] Some relations between RFCs in the
series are explicitly noted in the RFC header. For example, a new series are explicitly noted in the RFC header. For example, a new
RFC may update one or more earlier RFCs. Current relationships RFC may update one or more earlier RFCs. Currently two
are "Updates" and "Obsoletes". This document introduces the new relationships are defined "Updates" and "Obsoletes". Other types
relation "Clarifies" which can be used when a new RFC updates a of relations may be defined elsewhere.
previous RFC without making any normative changes.
Category: <category> This indicates the RFC document category of the Category: <category> This indicates the RFC document category of the
publication. These are defined in [RFC2026]. Currently, this is publication. These are defined in [RFC2026]. Currently, this is
always one of: Standards Track, Best Current Practice, always one of: Standards Track, Best Current Practice,
Experimental, Informational, or Historic. This element is Experimental, Informational, or Historic. This element is
unchanged. unchanged.
The ISSN number is the International Standard Serial
Number[ISO3297]. Once such number has been assigned to the RFC
series this element will appear here.
3.2. The Status of this Memo 3.2. The Status of this Memo
The "Status of This Memo" describes the category of the RFC, The "Status of This Memo" describes the category of the RFC,
including the distribution statement. This text is included including the distribution statement. This text is included
irrespective of the source stream of the RFC. irrespective of the source stream of the RFC.
Going forward, the "Status of This Memo" will start with a single From now on, the "Status of This Memo" will start with a single line
line describing the status. It will also include a statement describing the status. It will also include a statement describing
describing the the stream-specific review of the material (which is the stream-specific review of the material (which is stream-
stream-dependent). This is an important component of status, insofar dependent). This is an important component of status, insofar as it
as it clarifies the breadth and depth of review, and gives the reader clarifies the breadth and depth of review, and gives the reader an
an understanding of how to consider its content. understanding of how to consider its content.
The first paragraph of the Status of this Memo section contains a The first paragraph of the Status of this Memo section contains a
single line. It depends on the category of the document. single line, clearly standing out. It depends on the category of the
document.
This memo is an Internet Standards Track document. This memo is an Internet Standards Track document.
This memo is documents a Best Current Practice This memo documents an Internet Best Current Practice
This memo is not an Internet Standard Track specification, it is This memo is not an Internet Standards Track specifiation, <it is
published for Informational purposes. published for other purposes>.
The second paragraph contains the current text [RFC2223] describing For Informational, Experimental and other future categories of RFC
categories is as follows: editor will maintain an appropriate text for <it is published for
other purposes>. For example, with an Informational document this
could read "It is published for informational purposes".
This indicates the RFC number, assigned by the RFC Editor upon
publication of the document. This element is unchanged.
The second paragraph contains category-specific text as follows:
Standards Track: "This document specifies an Internet standards Standards Track: "This document specifies an Internet standards
track protocol for the Internet community, and requests discussion track protocol for the Internet community. Please see the
and suggestions for improvements. Please refer to the current "Updates to the RFC" section of this document for information on
edition of the "Internet Official Protocol Standards" (STD 1) for where to find the status of this protocol and the availability of
the standardization state and status of this protocol. errata for this memo."
Distribution of this memo is unlimited."
Best Current Practice: "This document specifies an Internet Best Best Current Practice: "This document specifies an Internet Best
Current Practices for the Internet Community, and requests Current Practices for the Internet Community. Please see the
discussion and suggestions for improvements. Distribution of this "Updates to the RFC" section of this document for information on
memo is unlimited." where to find the status of this protocol and the availability of
errata for this memo."
Experimental: "This memo defines an Experimental Protocol for the Experimental: "This memo defines an Experimental Protocol for the
Internet community. This memo does not specify an Internet Internet community. This memo does not specify an Internet
standard of any kind. Discussion and suggestions for improvement standard of any kind. Discussion and suggestions for improvement
are requested. Distribution of this memo is unlimited." are requested."
Informational: "This memo provides information for the Internet Informational: "This memo provides information for the Internet
community. This memo does not specify an Internet standard of any community. This memo does not specify an Internet standard of any
kind. Distribution of this memo is unlimited." kind. "
The third paragraph of the "Status of This Memo" will now include a The third paragraph of the "Status of This Memo" will now include a
paragraph describing the type of review and exposure the document has paragraph describing the type of review and exposure the document has
received. This is defined on a per-stream basis. Going forward, received. This is defined on a per-stream basis. From now on, these
these paragraphs will be defined as part of RFC stream definition. paragraphs will be defined as part of RFC stream definition.
Initial paragraphs for the existing streams are: The following texts may be updated if the stream definitions are
updated, but initial paragraphs for the existing streams are:
IETF Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Engineering IETF Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Engineering
Task Force (IETF). Per the IETF's specification process, this Task Force (IETF). "
document represents a consensus of the IETF community. It has
received public review and has been approved for publication by If there has been an IETF consensus call per IETF process, an
the IESG." additional sentence should be added: "This document represents a
consensus of the IETF community. It has received public review
and has been approved for publication by the IESG."
IAB Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Architecture IAB Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Architecture
Board (IAB), and represents information that the IAB has deemed Board (IAB), and represents information that the IAB has deemed
valuable to provide for permanent record. This document has been valuable to provide for permanent record. This document has been
approved for publication by the IAB and is therefore not a approved for publication by the IAB and is therefore not a
candidate for any level of Internet Standard, see section candidate for any level of Internet Standard; see section
Section 2 of RFCXXXX." Section 2 of RFCXXXX."
IRTF Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Research IRTF Stream: "This document is a product of the Internet Research
Task Force (IRTF). The IRTF publishes the results of Internet- Task Force (IRTF). The IRTF publishes the results of Internet-
related research and development activities. These results might related research and development activities. These results might
not be suitable for deployment. This document has been approved not be suitable for deployment. This document has been approved
for publication by the IRSG and is therefore not a candidate for for publication by the IRSG. It is not a product of the IETF and
any level of Internet Standard, see section Section 2 of RFCXXXX." is therefore not a candidate for any level of Internet Standard;
see section Section 2 of RFCXXXX."
In addition a sentence indicating the consensus base within the In addition a sentence indicating the consensus base within the
IRTF may be added: "This RFC represents the consensus of the IRTF may be added: "This RFC represents the consensus of the
<insert_name> Research Group of the Internet Research Task Force <insert_name> Research Group of the Internet Research Task Force
(IRTF)." or alternatively "This RFC represents the individual (IRTF)." or alternatively "This RFC represents the individual
opinion(s) of one or more members of the <insert_name> Research opinion(s) of one or more members of the <insert_name> Research
Group of the Internet Research Task Force (IRTF)". Group of the Internet Research Task Force (IRTF)".
Independent Stream: "This document is a contribution to the RFC Independent Stream: "This document is a contribution to the RFC
Series, independently of any other RFC stream. The RFC Editor has Series, independently of any other RFC stream. The RFC Editor has
chosen to publish this document at its discretion and makes no chosen to publish this document at its discretion and makes no
statement about its value for implementation or deployment. It is statement about its value for implementation or deployment. It is
therefore not a candidate for any level of Internet Standard, see therefore not a candidate for any level of Internet Standard; see
section Section 2 of RFCXXXX." section Section 2 of RFCXXXX."
3.3. Additional Notes 3.3. Additional Notes
Exceptionally, a review and publication process may prescribe Exceptionally, a review and publication process may prescribe
additional notes that will appear as labelled notes after the "Status additional notes that will appear as labelled notes after the "Status
of This Memo". of This Memo".
While this has been a common feature of recent RFCs, it is the goal While this has been a common feature of recent RFCs, it is the goal
of this exercise to make the overall RFC structure adequately clear of this exercise to make the overall RFC structure adequately clear
to remove the need for such notes, or at least make their usage truly to remove the need for such notes, or at least make their usage truly
exceptional. exceptional.
3.4. Other structural information in RFCs
RFCs contain other structural informational elements. The RFC Editor
is responsible for the positioning and layout of these structural
element. Note also that new elements may be introduced or obsoleted
using a process consistent with [RFC4844]. These additions may or
may not require documentation in an RFC.
Currently the following structural information is available in RFCs.
Copyright Notice A copyright notice with a reference to BCP78 and an
Intellectual Property statement referring to BCP78 and BCP79. The
content of these statements are defined by those BCPs.
ISSN The International Standard Serial Number[ISO3297]: ISSN 2070-
1721. The ISSN uniquely identifies the RFC series as title
regardless of language or country in which published. The ISSN
itself has no significance other than the unique identification of
a serial publication.
Updates to the RFC A reference identifying where more information
about the document can be found. This includes information wether
the RFC has been updated, obsoleted, or clarified, a listing of
possible errata, and information on how to submit errata as
described in [I-D.rfc-editor-errata-process].
4. Security considerations 4. Security considerations
This document tries to clarify the descriptions of the status of an This document tries to clarify the descriptions of the status of an
RFC. Misunderstanding the status of a memo could cause RFC. Misunderstanding the status of a memo could cause
interoperability problems, hence security and stability problems. interoperability problems, hence security and stability problems.
5. IANA considerations 5. IANA considerations
None. None.
6. RFC Editor Considerations 6. RFC Editor Considerations
[To Be Removed before publication] The RFC Editor is responsibile for maintaining the consistency of the
RFC series. To that end the RFC Editor maintains a style manual
[insert reference]. In this memo we mention a few explicit
structural elements that the RFC editor needs to maintain. The
conventions for the content and use of all current and future
elements are to be documented in the style manual.
[The rest of this section contains specific instructions towards
editing this document and can be removed before publication]
The documents has two sections, including this one that need to be The documents has two sections, including this one that need to be
removed after publication. removed before publication as an RFC. This one and Appendix B.
ISSN: [TBD] is where the International Standards Serial Number will This memo introduces a number of modifications that will have to be
need to be appear once assigned. implemented in various tools, such as the xml2rfc tool, the nit
tracker and the rfc-erratum portal.
The number "XXXX" is to be replaced with RFC number of this memo. The number "XXXX" is to be replaced with RFC number of this memo.
The Reference RFCXXXX-1 is to be replaced with the details of the RFC
published prior to this publication.
7. References 7. References
7.1. Normative References 7.1. Normative References
[RFC2026] Bradner, S., "The Internet Standards Process -- Revision [RFC2026] Bradner, S., "The Internet Standards Process -- Revision
3", BCP 9, RFC 2026, October 1996. 3", BCP 9, RFC 2026, October 1996.
[RFC2223] Postel, J. and J. Reynolds, "Instructions to RFC Authors", [I-D.housley-iesg-rfc3932bis]
RFC 2223, October 1997. Alvestrand, H. and R. Housley, "IESG Procedures for
Handling of Independent and IRTF Stream Submissions",
[RFC4844] Daigle, L. and Internet Architecture Board, "The RFC draft-housley-iesg-rfc3932bis-01 (work in progress),
Series and RFC Editor", RFC 4844, July 2007. August 2008.
7.2. Informative References 7.2. Informative References
[ISO3297] Technical Committee ISO/TC 46, Information and [ISO3297] Technical Committee ISO/TC 46, Information and
documentation, Subcommittee SC 9, Identification and documentation, Subcommittee SC 9, Identification and
description., "Information and documentation - description., "Information and documentation -
International standard serial number (ISSN)", 09 2007. International standard serial number (ISSN)", 09 2007.
[RFCXXXX-1] [RFC0003] Crocker, S., "Documentation conventions", RFC 3,
Blaaa Fooo, "[The RFC previous to this one]", --- 2007. April 1969.
[RFC2223] Postel, J. and J. Reynolds, "Instructions to RFC Authors",
RFC 2223, October 1997.
[RFC2629] Rose, M., "Writing I-Ds and RFCs using XML", RFC 2629, [RFC2629] Rose, M., "Writing I-Ds and RFCs using XML", RFC 2629,
June 1999. June 1999.
[RFC3978] Bradner, S., "IETF Rights in Contributions", BCP 78, [RFC3978] Bradner, S., "IETF Rights in Contributions", BCP 78,
RFC 3978, March 2005. RFC 3978, March 2005.
[RFC4844] Daigle, L. and Internet Architecture Board, "The RFC
Series and RFC Editor", RFC 4844, July 2007.
[I-D.rfc-editor-errata-process]
Ginoza, S., Hagens, A., and R. Braden, "RFC Editor
Proposal for Handling RFC Errata",
draft-rfc-editor-errata-process-02 (work in progress),
May 2008.
Appendix A. Acknowledgements Appendix A. Acknowledgements
Thanks to Bob Braden, Brian Carpenter, Steve Crocker and John Klensin Thanks to Bob Braden, Brian Carpenter, Steve Crocker and John Klensin
who provided background information and inspiration. who provided background information and inspiration.
Various people have made suggestions that improved the document. Various people have made suggestions that improved the document.
Among them are: Loa Andersson, Lars Eggert, Russ Housley, David Oran. Among them are: Loa Andersson, Lars Eggert, Alfred Hines, Russ
Housley, and David Oran.
This document was produced using the xml2rfc tool [RFC2629]. This document was produced using the xml2rfc tool [RFC2629].
Appendix B. Document Editing Details Appendix B. Document Editing Details
[To Be Removed before publication] [To Be Removed before publication]
This section will contain a discription of the changes between the B.1. version 00->01
various versions of this document.
Fixed the header so it appropriatly shows that the document updates
RFC 4844, 2223. And added a link to 3932-bis that should appear in
tandem with this publication.
Introduced the "Other structural information in RFCs" section and
moved the ISSN number from the front matter to this section. The
"Other structural information in RFCs" intends to give very rough
guidance providing the RFC editor with sufficient freedom to move
pieces around and edit them to please the eye and mind.
Modified the last sentence 3rd paragraph of the Status of this memo
section for the IRTF Stream in accordance to a suggestion by Aaron
Falk; Indicating that review happend by the IRSG and not indicating
that review did not happen by the IESG.
Introduced the square brackets around the <author affiliation> in the
header. To highlight this is an optional elelment.
The definition of the "Clarifies" relation has been taken out. There
are arguments that introducing the relation needs a bit more thought
and is better done by a seperate document.
Provided the RFC Editor with responsibility to maintain several text
pieces.
In Section 3.2 some modifications were applied to the text.
The <discription> contains the full name of the stream.
RFC2223 and 4844 moved to the informative reference section.
Although I am not sure if those are not normative. Guidance!!!
B.1.1. open issues
Does the RFC Editor wants to supply text with respect to the level of
review in Section 3.2 for the Independent Stream?
Authors' Addresses Authors' Addresses
Leslie Daigle (editor) Leslie Daigle (editor)
Email: daigle@isoc.org, leslie@thinkingcat.com Email: daigle@isoc.org, leslie@thinkingcat.com
Olaf M. Kolkman (editor) Olaf M. Kolkman (editor)
Internet Architecture Board
Email: olaf@nlnetlabs.nl Email: olaf@nlnetlabs.nl
Internet Architecture Board Internet Architecture Board
Email: iab@iab.org Email: iab@iab.org
Full Copyright Statement Full Copyright Statement
Copyright (C) The IETF Trust (2008). Copyright (C) The IETF Trust (2008).
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