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Run idnits with the --verbose option for more detailed information about the items above. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 2 Internet Draft Bala Rajagopalan 3 Document: Tellium, Inc. 4 This draft expires on August, 25, 2002 6 MPLampS: Electricity over IP (with an MPLS control plane) 8 Status of this Memo 10 This document is an Internet-Draft and is in full conformance with 11 all provisions of Section 10 of RFC2026 [1]. 13 Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering 14 Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups. Note that 15 other groups may also distribute working documents as Internet- 16 Drafts. Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of 17 six months and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other 18 documents at any time. It is inappropriate to use Internet- Drafts 19 as reference material or to cite them other than as "work in 20 progress." 22 The list of current Internet-Drafts can be accessed at 23 http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-abstracts.txt. 25 The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at 26 http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html. 28 1. Abstract 30 Mostly Pointless Lamp Switching (MPLampS) is an architecture for 31 carrying electricity over IP (with an MPLS control plane). According 32 to our marketing department, MPLampS has the potential to 33 dramatically lower the price, ease the distribution and usage, and 34 improve the manageability of delivering electricity. This document is 35 motivated by such work as SONET/SDH over IP/MPLS [2] (with apologies 36 to the authors). Readers of the previous work have been observed 37 scratching their heads and muttering, "What next?". This document 38 answers that question. 40 This document has also been written as a public service. The "Sub-IP" 41 area has been formed to give equal opportunity to those working on 42 technologies outside of traditional IP networking to write 43 complicated IETF drafts. There are possibly many who are wondering 44 how to exploit this opportunity and attain high visibility. Towards 45 this goal, we see the topics of "foo-over-MPLS" (or MPLS control for 46 random technologies) as highly amenable for producing countless 47 number of unimplementable drafts. This document illustrates the 48 key ingredients that go into producing any "foo-over-MPLS" draft 49 and may be used as a template for all such work. 51 Rajagopalan Expires on 8/25/02 1 52 2. Conventions used in this document 54 The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "DO", "DON'T", "REQUIRED", 55 "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", 56 "MAY BE" and "OPTIONAL" in this document do not mean anything. 58 3. Pre-requisite for reading this document 60