idnits 2.17.1 draft-ietf-mboned-mix-00.txt: Checking boilerplate required by RFC 5378 and the IETF Trust (see https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info): ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ** Looks like you're using RFC 2026 boilerplate. This must be updated to follow RFC 3978/3979, as updated by RFC 4748. Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/1id-guidelines.txt: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ** Missing expiration date. The document expiration date should appear on the first and last page. ** The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about Internet-Drafts being working documents. ** The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about 6 months document validity -- however, there's a paragraph with a matching beginning. Boilerplate error? ** The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about the list of current Internet-Drafts. ** The document seems to lack a 1id_guidelines paragraph about the list of Shadow Directories. == The page length should not exceed 58 lines per page, but there was 9 longer pages, the longest (page 2) being 60 lines == It seems as if not all pages are separated by form feeds - found 0 form feeds but 11 pages Checking nits according to https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist : ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ** The document seems to lack an Introduction section. (A line matching the expected section header was found, but with an unexpected indentation: ' 1. Introduction' ) ** The document seems to lack a Security Considerations section. (A line matching the expected section header was found, but with an unexpected indentation: ' 6. Security Considerations' ) ** The document seems to lack an IANA Considerations section. (See Section 2.2 of https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist for how to handle the case when there are no actions for IANA.) ** There are 51 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one being 4 characters in excess of 72. ** The abstract seems to contain references ([MSDP], [PIM-DM], [DVMRP], [PIM-SM]), which it shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the documents in question. Miscellaneous warnings: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- == The copyright year in the RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line does not match the current year -- The document seems to lack a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, but may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. If you have contacted all the original authors and they are all willing to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust, then this is fine, and you can ignore this comment. If not, you may need to add the pre-RFC5378 disclaimer. (See the Legal Provisions document at https://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) -- The document date (May 1999) is 9113 days in the past. Is this intentional? Checking references for intended status: Informational ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- -- Missing reference section? 'PIM-SM' on line 387 looks like a reference -- Missing reference section? 'MSDP' on line 397 looks like a reference -- Missing reference section? 'DVMRP' on line 374 looks like a reference -- Missing reference section? 'PIM-DM' on line 392 looks like a reference Summary: 11 errors (**), 0 flaws (~~), 3 warnings (==), 6 comments (--). Run idnits with the --verbose option for more detailed information about the items above. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 2 Mbone Deployment Working Group Hugh LaMaster 3 INTERNET-DRAFT Steve Shultz 4 Category: Informational NASA ARC/NREN 5 draft-ietf-mboned-mix-00.txt John Meylor 6 Operations and Management Area David Meyer 7 Internet Engineering Task Force Cisco Systems 8 12 November 1998 9 Expires May 1999 11 Multicast-Friendly Internet Exchange (MIX) 12