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Levin, Ed. 6 Microsoft Corporation 7 March 25, 2005 9 A Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) Event Package for Conference 10 State 11 draft-ietf-sipping-conference-package-10 13 Status of this Memo 15 This document is an Internet-Draft and is subject to all provisions 16 of Section 3 of RFC 3667. By submitting this Internet-Draft, each 17 author represents that any applicable patent or other IPR claims of 18 which he or she is aware have been or will be disclosed, and any of 19 which he or she become aware will be disclosed, in accordance with 20 RFC 3668. 22 Internet-Drafts are working documents of the Internet Engineering 23 Task Force (IETF), its areas, and its working groups. Note that 24 other groups may also distribute working documents as 25 Internet-Drafts. 27 Internet-Drafts are draft documents valid for a maximum of six months 28 and may be updated, replaced, or obsoleted by other documents at any 29 time. It is inappropriate to use Internet-Drafts as reference 30 material or to cite them other than as "work in progress." 32 The list of current Internet-Drafts can be accessed at 33 http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-abstracts.txt. 35 The list of Internet-Draft Shadow Directories can be accessed at 36 http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html. 38 This Internet-Draft will expire on September 26, 2005. 40 Copyright Notice 42 Copyright (C) The Internet Society (2005). 44 Abstract 46 This document defines a conference event package for the Session 47 Initiation Protocol (SIP) Events framework, along with a data format 48 used in notifications for this package. The conference package 49 allows users to subscribe to a conference URI. Notifications are 50 sent about changes in the membership of this conference and 51 optionally about changes in the state of additional conference 52 components. 54 Table of Contents 56 1. Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 57 2. Terminology . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 58 3. Conference Event Package . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 59 3.1 Event Package Name . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 60 3.2 SUBSCRIBE Bodies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 61 3.3 Subscription Duration . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 62 3.4 NOTIFY Bodies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 63 3.5 Notifier Processing of SUBSCRIBE Requests . . . . . . . . 6 64 3.6 Notifier Generation of NOTIFY Requests . . . . . . . . . . 6 65 3.7 Subscriber Processing of NOTIFY Requests . . . . . . . . . 6 66 3.8 Handling of Forked Requests . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 67 3.9 Rate of Notifications . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 68 3.10 State Agents . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 69 4. Conference Document . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 70 4.1 Format . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 71 4.2 Namespace . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 72 4.3 Versioning . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 7 73 4.4 Partial Notifications Mechanism . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 74 4.5 Element Keys . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 9 75 4.6 Constructing Coherent State Procedure . . . . . . . . . . 9 76 5. Conference Data . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 10 77 5.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11 78 5.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11 79 5.2.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 12 80 5.2.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 81 5.2.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 82 5.2.4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 83 5.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 84 5.3.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 85 5.3.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 86 5.3.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 87 5.4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 88 5.4.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 89 5.4.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15 90 5.4.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15 91 5.5 of . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15 92 5.5.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 93 5.5.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 94 5.5.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 95 5.5.4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 96 5.5.5 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 97 5.5.6 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 16 98 5.6 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 99 5.6.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 100 5.6.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 101 5.6.3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 102 5.6.4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 19 103 5.6.5 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 19 104 5.6.6 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 19 105 5.6.7 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 106 5.6.8 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 107 5.6.9 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 108 5.7 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21 109 5.7.1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21 110 5.7.2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 21 111 5.7.3