[6tisch] (suggested disposition) Re: Last call for draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-05

Hi Pascal:

My suggested resolution to my comment was the simplest one: to simply 
delete this 2nd para of Section 13. This would also make Section 13 
(minus the 2nd para) reflect confirmed consensus in the 6TiSCH security 
design team [see also minutes conf call of January 22, 2015: 
http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/6tisch-security/current/msg00413.html]).

I think it is somewhat odd to single out one individual security draft 
in the Appendix and not include others, since it raises questions as to 
what the criteria for inclusion and exclusion of those drafts were. To 
avoid going down this path, I personally would rather not give rise to 
those types of questions and simply delete this.

Best regards, Rene

On 2/24/2015 6:03 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) wrote:
>
> Hello René:
>
> I removed that section, and added an appendix that lists the 6TiSCH 
> personal submissions that may impact the next volumes.
>
> The new text reads as follows
>
> /Appendix A.  Personal submissions relevant to the next volumes /
>
> //
>
> /   This volume only covers a portion of the total work that is needed 
> to /
>
> /   cover the full 6TiSCH architecture.  Missing portions include /
>
> /   Deterministic Networking with Track Forwarding, Dynamic Scheduling, /
>
> /   and Security. /
>
> //
>
> /   [I-D.richardson-6tisch-security-architecture] elaborates on the /
>
> /   potential use of 802.1AR certificates, and some options for the join /
>
> /   process are presented in more details. /
>
> //
>
> /   [I-D.dujovne-6tisch-on-the-fly] discusses the use of the 6top /
>
> /   sublayer [I-D.wang-6tisch-6top-sublayer] to adapt dynamically the /
>
> /   number of cells between a RPL parent and a child to the needs of the /
>
> /   actual traffic. /
>
> The diffs are here:
>
> https://bitbucket.org/6tisch/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture/commits/0e07e721ce096cbd02f93c5cfbf9e58e576ac124?at=master#chg-draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-06.xml 
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Pascal
>
> *From:*Rene Struik [mailto:rstruik.ext@gmail.com]
> *Sent:* jeudi 19 février 2015 05:39
> *To:* Géraldine TEXIER; Shwetha Bhandari (shwethab)
> *Cc:* 6tisch@ietf.org; Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
> *Subject:* Re: [6tisch] Last call for draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-05
>
> Dear colleagues:
>
> I think the draft document draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-05 is in 
> relatively good shape.
>
> One note: the second para of Clause 13 seems out of place and should 
> be removed.
>
> Best regards, Rene
>
> On 2/18/2015 11:49 AM, Géraldine TEXIER wrote:
>
>     Dear All,
>
>     I have reviewed the draft draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-05 and I
>     support its publication
>
>     Best Regards
>
>     Geraldine
>
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>         *From: *"Shwetha Bhandari (shwethab)" <shwethab@cisco.com
>         <mailto:shwethab@cisco.com>>
>         *Date: *Thursday, February 12, 2015 at 5:06 AM
>         *To: *"6tisch@ietf.org <mailto:6tisch@ietf.org>"
>         <6tisch@ietf.org <mailto:6tisch@ietf.org>>
>         *Subject: *Re: [6tisch] Last call for
>         draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-05
>
>         Hello All,
>
>         We are down to the last week of this last call, and haven't
>         received any comments/vote yet.
>
>         Please review and send in your comments / vote, this last call
>         ends on 18th Feb.
>
>         Thanks,
>
>         Shwetha
>
>
>
>
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