[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last review Call draft-ietf-core-observe-14

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 08 August 2014 16:55 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-core-observe-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2014-08-08
IETF LC End Date:   2014-08-08
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC.

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 12], "entry with with"--typo-->"entry with"
-[Page 13], "when the the age"--typo-->"when the age"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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