Re: [Roll] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-12: (with COMMENT)

Robert Cragie <robert.cragie@gridmerge.com> Tue, 28 July 2015 08:18 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] Stephen Farrell's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Stephen,

Please see inline for specific responses.

Regarding the old comments: We have tried to respond to these issues in
previous follow up e-mails and modify the document in accordance with the
responses. Repeating these old comments suggests that neither those
responses nor the updated text have been read yet. Please can you read the
responses and updated text before simply repeating these comments?
Otherwise I can't see how we can make any progress on this.

Robert


On 25 July 2015 at 15:08, Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> wrote:

> Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-roll-applicability-home-building-12: No Objection
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> Thanks for the discussion about security. I didn't check
> if the comments below were handled in -12, happy to
> chat about that if you want.
>
> First two comments are about text that's new in -11:
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> - 4.1.8: "MUST be present" is ambiguous - do you mean
> it must be used? I think you do.
>

<RCC>This has been changed to "MUST be used on all nodes" in -12</RCC>


>
> - 4.1.8: "MUST be distributed or established in a
> secure fashion" isn't really a protocol requirement.
> Do you really just mean "see 4.1.8.1" ?
>

<RCC>As mentioned before, this is just introductory. I suggest removing the
sentence to close the comment.</RCC>