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Comments/issues
Additional clarifications to the DRegex syntax per Allison’s comments
Security Section: needs to address attacks and mandatory capabilities to be implemented
Clarification on use of “leg” parameter and target dialog
Reduce forward references
Section 3.10, need Sustained Rate (100 Not/min)
Clean up non-normative test on GRUU, Section 2.3
Remove references to MSCML
Add call flow examples for third party subscription and remote-end monitoring
Separate Paragraph for failure processing
Expand abstract
Clean up terminology (SIP port, leg, remote media stream, KPML request, “registered”, filter,…)
XML namespace and schema registrations do not contain sufficient information.
Editorial Cleanup

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